- Played with the action shot and convention of establishing shot - started with a close up rather than an ELS.
- Match on action - from when he runs into the room in slow motion and crashes into the locker.
- Good range of shot types.
What we could improve:
- Start of chaotically and then move to slow motion - too much of a change and seemed out of place.
- Room looks the same on both sides, so it looks as though he falls over toward the locker he crashed into, rather than away from it.
- Broke the 180 degree rule - crossed an invisible line and the direction was changed.
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